First 250 Words Smash! #48 Most Wonderful Author: AwayLaughingMost Evil Critique Master: AlyWorking
First 250 Words Smash! #48 Most Wonderful Author: AwayLaughingMost Evil Critique Master: AlyWorking Title: In Living Memory Neiar, who was half asleep from a long day of doing nothing, jerked awake when the large doors of the antechamber banged open and yet another woman was escorted in by black clad Sentries. With her she brought the crackle of magic, strong and clear despite the dampening spells. The girl next to Near leaned subtly toward him, one hand coming to his arm, squeezing gently.“Hedgewitch, maybe,” she said, voice pitched low. Neiar nodded, his own fingers clutching at his chair. The woman who came in was tall, hair a vibrant red. She wore simple but clean clothing with no adornment, likely not a College wife, or a member herself then. Revealing setting creates all kinds of anxiety, especially when trying to figure out if we’re doing it too much or too little. But gain a little bit more insight by reading the rest of this intro and what we have to say about it on the bloggity blog. (And if you have no idea what this word smash thingy is, read this.) -- source link
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