First 250 Words Smash! #53Most Wonderful Author: HafzaMost Evil Critique Master: RebeccaWorking Titl
First 250 Words Smash! #53Most Wonderful Author: HafzaMost Evil Critique Master: RebeccaWorking Title: “Those Who Walk the Darkness” “Shh, yes, that’s it.” His mother’s voice guided his hand. There was a shift and he slipped. “Oh, be careful, it’s hard to get good ones like these now. They’ve started watching now.”“But they can’t always be watching, right, Mummy?” His voice was small and childish in the flickering lamplight. There was a low laugh from beyond the edge of the light.“That’s right, my son. They can’t always be on guard. The darkness cannot be banished for long, and they can’t escape the shadows forever.” He finished his last stroke and reached for the cloth to wipe. “You’re not finished yet.” His mother’s voice was sharp. He sighed as only a small child can, dramatic and exhaustive. “Moth-er!” If you’re starting your story with a scene of shock and suspense, read the rest of this intro and find some tips on the bloggity blog about whether or not it’s working! (And if you have no idea what this word smash thingy is, read this.) -- source link
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