First 250 Words Smash! Most Wonderful Author: ReneeMost Evil Critique Master: AngeWorking Title: N/A
First 250 Words Smash! Most Wonderful Author: ReneeMost Evil Critique Master: AngeWorking Title: N/A I swung the brass-Wait, you need to hear the beginning first. I can’t leave it out. I’m sorry.I want you to know that I wasn’t always a bad person before I tell you what I did.The beginning wasn’t at my birth. There were years worth of pieces that tied together to make the beginning.My father. The way anger would distort his long face. The scar across his bottom lip, shaped like a half moon. The way he’d take me outside in the mornings he was home and watch birds with me. The weeks that went by without anyone hearing a word from him. He would come back with bruises and cuts on his face. If you’ve been considering starting your story with exposition or backstory, take a look at the rest of this intro and our critique. I’ve seen on-point advice on how starting with background information might not be a good idea, but we tried to really illustrate why here. If you’re still waiting on your critique, you’ve been awesomely patient and we appreciate it! We’re either finished or are currently working on intros submitted before April 8 at 6:38 a.m. PST, so if you submitted after this time, feel free to revise and resubmit a more updated version. Just make sure you mark in your subject header that this is a revision! (And if you have no idea what this word smash thingy is, read this.) -- source link
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